by Matthew A. Sep 28, 2005
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
On the roof you look into the sky |
by emmerz
Hey great poem... i can totally relate to the feeling of being on a rooftop and just lookin at everything... just cant explain it:P oh well, youre an awesome poet, keep up the good work! |
Gewd..keep it up! xxLISSA |
Hey...you already on my favourite list...i guess i've forgotten to tell you that...you are amazing...i love all your poems especially this one...it's so beautiful...all your works are beautiful...hope to see more from you and thanks for your comments... |
Very good poem. |
by kat
Wow you're pretty good, and your flow was nice and the message was beautiful and i agree w/ the flow being a lil choppy but your rhyming is tons better than mine. you've got a lot of talent, keep it up! |