This is a really good poem.It really changes my mind about alot of things.It reminds me about.....never mind.Anyways good poem.Hopefully you write some more.You should have let this talent shine before.well lataz

Kudos, Matt! I'm impressed. This is a very good poem and a striking first submission. Great subject, and well handled- you've got talent. Keep up the good work!

Mercedes

I wish i can climb up to the roof and look into the sky, but i can't, it's too high and i can't climb up, hehe...

Nice poem, it's great to have you here.

@>---A ROSE FOR YOU

Hope you like it.

LOVE...PEACE..:P

There could be a bit more done with the flow, but all in all well done

*jackie*

Wow.. That's a really great poem sweetheart. Keep it up, you're really good. I love it. *hugs*

~Jessica

Wow that poem was great. i loved it Matt. keep it up i look forward to reading many more from you...luv and huggs...missy

Another good poem your very talented
laterz,
maui

Wow you're pretty good, and your flow was nice and the message was beautiful and i agree w/ the flow being a lil choppy but your rhyming is tons better than mine. you've got a lot of talent, keep it up!

kat

Very good poem.

Hey...you already on my favourite list...i guess i've forgotten to tell you that...you are amazing...i love all your poems especially this one...it's so beautiful...all your works are beautiful...hope to see more from you and thanks for your comments...

Gewd..keep it up! xxLISSA

Hey great poem... i can totally relate to the feeling of being on a rooftop and just lookin at everything... just cant explain it:P oh well, youre an awesome poet, keep up the good work!
~*~Emily~*~