That was very good your very talented

5/5 love it....its BEAUTIFUL hahah omg and your welcome for the acknowlegement lol yaeh cant spell that...but thats ok good job
Becky
xoxo

Very nice job. The more poems i read from you. The more you sound like me. lol

Amazing job. i really like this one. You are very talented i have to say. I really think that this poem was very sad and very true. I mean everyone person you talk to about anything like your consulor(spelled wrong ooopps) at school or something "oh it's okay stay strong everything will be okay" and they don't understand but i think if you talk to a friend or something there will understand and i do hope your okay. Also i'm here for you if you need someone to talk to. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

It's outstanding!

I heart the poem.

"Now matter how i cry, you dont care"

"Now" should be "No" =)

My favourite lines are:

"Why Must it be like this, and why me
How is it that in a crowd i can feel lonely"

And

"
No one can help, I've dug myself too deep,
Into this bleek grave, where i Sleep"

Kudos to you M'Dear.

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(='.'=)
(")-(") Arrivederci!

Okay this wasnt one of your best i dont think there were places where yourr rhymes were way off and it just didnt flow right for me

Wow i love this mainly cuz i been here and felt like this, you did amazing job and the rhymeing was great. keep up the good work and thanks for all you comments and votes.. 5.5

Very nice job.. i really enjoyed reading your poems this one has a ver nice flow 5/5 nice job overall i would say 4/5! nice job though