Wow. this poem was really deep. i could really relate to it. good job keep it up ..::..alreadyGoNe..::..

DAM THAT WAS VERY GOOD AND VERY DARK ONE OF THE BEST I'VE READ 5/5

I absolutely loved it. everything rhymed perfectly and the depth to your words were amazing
- Suzie

Great peice, well written with a good flow and well expresed content

Wow.. you are so getting onto my fav's list! you are an amazing writer and you have a true talent! this was so deep, so clear, it just.. i donno, it was like you opened yourself up for everyone to see! it was brilliant! 10/5
jessy xox