Comments : She's (Not) All That I Need

  • 19 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    Very dark, cold, and calm.
    Like a whisper.

    Good Writing,
    beth

  • 19 years ago

    by Atomic

    Excellent poem, I usually prefer one that rhymes...but this is ery good.

    The last stanza especially.

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!