by hayley williams Nov 29, 2003
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Two periods never came, |
by BECLiKEW0AHH
Hey, Excellent poem. Its really heart-felt & has a really good flow. I think you are a very talented writer, But this poem is by far one of my favorites because i too have lost a baby threw miscarriage, So i share your pain. |
you know how to touch peoples heart through your poems. you have touched mine i cant wait to read more |
hey guys thank you so much for your kind comments, this is a true story yes, it stillhurts alot! to all the girls who have also lost children i feel your pain and thanks for taking time to try to console me even thro your own pain and struggle hayleyxx |
I didn't comment on the poem Miscarriage because when I looked at the comments they seemed to be so so long. But there was this one and I couldn't pass by this one too without saying how badly I feel for you. I really loved the first one because through the agony of losing a child you wrote about it and you wrote it so well, as you did here. So again I just want to tell you how sorry I am but also commend you on your courage to write 2 beautiful poem on your losses. |