I didn't comment on the poem Miscarriage because when I looked at the comments they seemed to be so so long. But there was this one and I couldn't pass by this one too without saying how badly I feel for you. I really loved the first one because through the agony of losing a child you wrote about it and you wrote it so well, as you did here. So again I just want to tell you how sorry I am but also commend you on your courage to write 2 beautiful poem on your losses.
Well done Hayley, K

hey guys thank you so much for your kind comments, this is a true story yes, it stillhurts alot! to all the girls who have also lost children i feel your pain and thanks for taking time to try to console me even thro your own pain and struggle hayleyxx

you know how to touch peoples heart through your poems. you have touched mine i cant wait to read more

Hey, Excellent poem. Its really heart-felt & has a really good flow. I think you are a very talented writer, But this poem is by far one of my favorites because i too have lost a baby threw miscarriage, So i share your pain.
Keep up the great writing.
5/5 Bec xx