Confusion?

Silent tears fall like black crystals
Rushing from the depths of polar eyes
Blood of deep purple glistens in puddles
Caused by the sorrows of navy skys

Shadow\'s desire to pull us down,
Consuming all noise that befalls.
A young maiden lies cold in frown,
Buried in Silence as the wolf calls...

The Reflecting of knives burn within;
Peircing a soul that will never rest.
Agony and strife forced her to give in
She says she\'s sorry, she shall\'nt pass this test...

The demons now seek for purness,
She was not enough to please,
Hysterical laughter fills the darkness,
And will never think to seize.

Clock ticks by, far too slowly:
The waiting are restless for fear.
As the fiery angels hover cruelly
Awaiting to prowl the earth by spear

Cumbersome innocence is they\'re target,
With the crows by their side
Maybe occasionaly a dark poet;
Writing with far too much pride.

*please please vote/comment on my poem i need to improve it