That is really good and sad and yea u get my piont right well it relates to my life its understndable so yea
~*Lydia*~

Hey this is awsome i am almost exactlly like this untill i got dalton and changed all that anyways it was awsome !!! keep it up and look at mine comment and rate please i promise to do the same !!!

-tara-

Hun, that was freaken beautiful..

This is a WoNdErFuL poem. and yes u r just as good as the other wtiters on this site

OMGSh..!GIRL U ARE AWESOME..! :D KEEP IT Up...write me back..or add me up if any one who is reading this needs to talk...princesschantal_14@yahoo.com..
love u all soo soo much...:D
Valeria

This is how i feel keep up the good work!!

Wow, that was beautiful. I love your poem so much. There is a lot of emotion in it. I feel that way too sometimes. Keep writing, you are awesome! Take care.
> Kiesha

That was an awesome poem ,as I was reading it I could relate to how you feel.Keep up the great work

Tisha

More brilliant words. Your talent for conveying emotions is pretty special. I have added you to my favourites as I can't get enough of your stuff at the moment. Thankyou so much for sharing.

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Omgsh you are a wonderful writer! that is such a good poem and i feel the exact same way! wow i love all your poems!

Your poem is truly captivating, and the ending is truly unique. I regret if this is how you really feel, and I hope you can hang in there, because you are obviously talented, as this poem illustrates. 5/5 ~luv always, kt

I love this poem. You are very talented :)

Wow, that is such a flawless poem! I loved it! 5/5

In this poem you do not know how much you are talking about me. we should email each other sometime. tweetygirlmoni@yahoo.com

WOW! I can relate to this poem. It's wonderful, sad and true, but wondeful.

I love the flow of this poem keep up the great work!

Absolutely-A-M-A-Z-I-N-G......need i say more? you have true talent here, never waste it.

good work, keep going. =0)

xXx

I love pillows, too.

That was really good..n likewise, if u wanna talk, i'm here........well, i just wanted to return the favor, but i'm gonna read sum more of ur stuff now :)....great job tho! 5/5