Perfect

by Lydia   Sep 29, 2005


Perfect is all in the mind
little ones think perfect is people
teens think perfect is looks
adults think perfect is health
so is it all in the mind
everyone has a different perfect
but perfect is so far away
once one perfect goal is reached
another comes into play
so what is perfect really

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  • 19 years ago

    by XxCrazy4youxX

    ~*That was great 5/5....i understand wut ur trying to say and its very meaningful well keep up the great work*~ XoXo

  • 19 years ago

    by dyingbrokenangel

    Aweomse!!! i really liked it!! like loved it!! omg u r awesome!! i love this poem xox 5/5 5/5 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    Thats a good ?...now you got me thinking!! and few poems can do that n/e more...4/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Katlynn

    This is really good i think. I mean it gives off how PERFECT people need to have it. I mean i didn't really like the ending of this poem very much i mean after you were talking about how everyone wanted to have there PERFECT ways and stuff. I mean yeah nothing is PERFECT but just the way you had it i guess but you did a really good job on this I mean my writing isn't PERFECT at all but anyway keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.