This is really good i think. I mean it gives off how PERFECT people need to have it. I mean i didn't really like the ending of this poem very much i mean after you were talking about how everyone wanted to have there PERFECT ways and stuff. I mean yeah nothing is PERFECT but just the way you had it i guess but you did a really good job on this I mean my writing isn't PERFECT at all but anyway keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

Thats a good ?...now you got me thinking!! and few poems can do that n/e more...4/5

Aweomse!!! i really liked it!! like loved it!! omg u r awesome!! i love this poem xox 5/5 5/5 5/5

~*That was great 5/5....i understand wut ur trying to say and its very meaningful well keep up the great work*~ XoXo