Comments : No one notices

  • 19 years ago

    by Stabbylou

    That's an amazing poem, it's so beautifully written, i really don't know what to say, but well done, 5/5

    take care xx

  • 19 years ago

    by Morgan

    I really like this poem. It's true. They seem to care, but they don't really. Good job.
    Morgan

  • 19 years ago

    by skyfox

    Amazing work. You have captured exactly how it is. You have a great gift. Only someone who has been there can know what you know.

  • 19 years ago

    by Torn

    That is an amazing poem. i know exactly what you mean. wow!!
    i'm so desperate for that hand...i know what you mean when you they're always cold...
    great work xoxox

  • 19 years ago

    by Rachel

    Wow i love this..it's really deep. thanks for the comment

  • 19 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    I notice...and yeah no one notices me too...i go to school everyday...and be happy everyday...but they never knew the girl i am within me...they never...