Interesting Piece. I'm not a great fan of the style because the meter was weird and i hate 3 line stanzas because they don't seem to flow very well but that's personal feeling. My main problem with this is how often this sort of thing has been written. It seems very average and has unoriginal ideas within it. It wasn't too badly written in technique and its good that it relieves you emotions.
Keep it up and step out of the box.
Peace.

Hey hunnie. wow this is a really good one, i like it alot. It puts together all the emotions i have in side into one simple poem.But at the same time it kind of makes me angery, and it makes me understand why people think cuting is stupid. Its because of people like you. liz, YOU DON'T CUT. Yes one time you took a safty pin and sctartched your wrist. Thats why people that think that the people that cut do it for attention. Yes your good at writting pooetry about it, but if i didn't know you i would think that you were a seriouse suicidle cutter. And you shouldn't tell peple those things, like that you cut befor. Cuz I really don't count that lil scratch as cutting. And im not trying to be mean or harsh, but I do cut, and Im not proud of it, and when you go around telling people that you "used to cut" it makes me think that you feel its a joke or something. I dunno maybe im taking this outta proportion but this is how I feel and its been bottled up inside for a while. ~*~brina~*~