by XxTeArSxX17 Sep 29, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
TRAIL OF TEARS |
by Daniel J
I liked it. |
Ashleigh you did it again, girl. I loved it. |
by Jamie
Okay i dont think this is as good as your last one granted you wrote it in a class period sometimes i think it wasnted to rhyme but the rhyme scheme was messy and stuff so i dont know and when you did rhyme it was forced |
Wow, a poem that has all the great elements to make it great. A job wel done. ^_^x sorry for not reviewing earlier. |
WOA! A M A Z I N G!!!!! 5555555///10 |