That was good actually. Dont worry, I never find the right endings from such a good start. I know how you feel as well, it pretty much sucks. But you have to kinda bear with such moronic people, it will (hopefully) be better later in life. Nice Work!

-Jennifer.

P.S. Don't change your work, nothing can be improved if it comes from the heart.

Wkd poem. and its not about if they sound good that matters its about whats coming from inside. keep up and cheers 4 checkin out my poems:) 5/5 jess xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Maybe some poems shouldn't have an 'ending' because you're still feeling the emotions that drove you in the first place to such an experience. The only thing you should fix is the length, keep writing :)