Is this me?

by Lydie   Sep 29, 2005


I watch with a steady gaze
shadows upon the wall
tears stream down my face
but I feel nothing at all

for I am now emotionless
such a state of mine
spirit, soul and body
I've been trying to find

from all this misery and pain
I still have no response
trying to find myself
or the person I once was

nothing seems quite right for me
will it ever be the same?
scare of whom I've now become
and who I'll forever remain.

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  • 19 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    This is good! I like the context and confusion within it. The flow did break in a few places but it wasn't a major loss. I don't really care for the second stanza, but I love the ending! Very powerful! There is a typo in the next to last line, I think you meant to start the sentence off with scared not "scare"! Keep it up~Holly

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