That is a really awsome poem, i got shivers. I hope you continue to write

Sick, twisted, are you the rencarnation of Hitler? All in all i like it, and what ever guy can do this to someone needs to die, evil isnt exactly my way, but im a firm beleaver in paybacks sucks

Darkness runs in your heart.
the devil in your soul.
your poetry is just the start
to create something twisted but whole
5/5- CORIE

Good poem actually great i . like this one alot well i hope to see more of you keep up the good work.