I loves it it is awsome and i can tell it comes from the heart and its just great loves it lots

Very good poem, it is something i wish i could write, a poem that doesn't have to rythme to be a fantasic poem. Your a very good poet, i am sure that you will be published someday.

Signed,
Dark Savior

P.S. thank you for your comment on my poem, i always try and return the favor.

It seems to me it's five different poems combined together...but then it's all a piece of story...how cute is that...and i'm sure the person will forgive you...who won't....you are so sweet.