Itz pretty good

..not bad uhhhh well the truth hurts and if anyone gets offended by this..READ IT AGAIN..yea the world is screwed..and it's goin to hell in a handbag..but yea nice work check mine out sometime

Thats kool it's so right ppl believe the wrong things and listen to the wrong ppl they need to follow whot they think and not wat other ppl belive i luved it thx for tha comment !!!!

Ey I really liked your poem mija. Its a 5 fasho.

It worked cos there was no bullsh t, just plain speaking. Hardhitting maybe. well dun.

The ending isnt the best but the poem is great, it has alot of really true points and flows well despite the odd structure, well done :)

Yea I love this poem chick. Ey thanx for rating and commenting too. It reminds me of my gf's poem "Living in the ghetto." or something like that. well thanks for the love mami. Keep your head up.

Perty good poem.

Hay!..dis is such a good poem! i really like it's exactly wat im seein round my life!...fanx 4 commentin on my poem means alot
kepp it up MwA x

Wow i love your poem alot is so true

This is a good poem i really understand what you are talking about!!!!!

Thnx for the comment. i can relate to this poem in some ways like with the durgs and the pills. great poems.

I relate to this poem, but I never did the pills. I still do drugs tho, its the only thing I do, I quit the alcohol n all so. Its just weed im on, but this is an awesome poem, well, I feel it anyhow.

Wow that GRATE i mean GRATE! i think ur a profesional(sry cant spell it) lol