Amazing terminology here, I loved it. Especially how you describe each stanza's own, sort of meaning.

"Glistening rubies slide from each open wound" awesome line!

"Sycamores whisper the cold story of death" and yet another awesome line.

this poem is beautiful! it's dark and has this depressing sence to it but yet this flows wonderfuly and reads quickly and swiftly. it's really intresting and creative! wonderful write! keep up the awesome writing!

~Jacklyn

The way you display a regressing mind is explosively imaginative!
It was entertaining through and through, a good piece to read out loud too. It's amusing while picturing the madness one could adopt, while reading this to an audience *grins*.

Masterful use of language to conjur images of things long forgotten and buried.

Im not going to read your poems anymore...Iv gone green....that was so great, i would say something original but the others have baiscally sed what i wanted to, truly amazing, stay strong
xxxxxx

You are a great writer! your word usage is original and unique! your style changes and that is great!
I loved this poem, it was so dark yet interesting! well done! the flow great as always!
You are very very talented, thanks for sharing..

Lisaness x)

PS..long live the pie :D

Hey! you're another favourite around the site, and I thought i'd check your poems out. So far, they're amazing! Not to sound like im sucking up too much of course, but I would really be honoured if you could tell me whatyou thought of my poems... Again - great job! see you 'round the site!:)