Wow! very discriptive and moving...you did an excellent job, I especially love the way you ended it.

Sad Jacklyn :'( It's very sad to see such a beautiful thing as mother nature turn so ugly, within the blink of an eye. You describe in my mind the recent tragic events well.

Love yah hun,
- K.

Wow, your writing never ceases to amaze me, I have read so many fantastic poems today, I am wondering how I can keep up with this standard! This is wonderful, I read it whilst listening to an incredibly moving piece of music which added to how much the poem moved me...

Really made me think of the events which have occured over the past few weeks, mother nature is a terrible force when she does "unleash her secrets" as you put...

Homes crumble within seconds
families with no where to return
boats thrown upon the shore
flying rubble creating more

Loved that stanza so descriptive, well done to you jacklyn, keep writing
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By the way, I have just finished my poem "An enchanted box"

I like to take a look at poems by people who have read mine especially if they have constructive remarks. Hey, interesting poem. Was nice reading it. Taking a chance on reading another one of yours.