I really like this poem. it is like the story of my friend Desire'. Even tho i dont know how but he boyfriend of three years has moved on. some people say its his way of dealing with what happen. but i dont know. he blames himself and i wish he didnt but he's moved on already and its only been almost not even two months. this poem has touched me so much cause now i know what Desire' was feeling before she took her life. but she didnt do it with a gun... she hung herself. and it really hurts but now i understand more. i would give anything to have her back. but i guess god was calling her and she had to go. but i really like this poem. keep up the good work. your poems are really good.

Maria