Craddled To Her Death

by Fighter (Ariane L.)   Sep 29, 2005


Looking into the candle, anger rages within as I remember.
Sadness washes the rage as I look into her dying eyes.
Remembering what I tried so hard to forget, horrid memories.
Remembering the night that haunts me night and day.

Walking home from the grocery store, arms full of bags.
The wind's anger rages as leaves dance in the street.
The day's cold envelops me, sending shivers down my spine.
Moving slowly, taking my time to absorb autumn's scent.

Suddenly, a scream shrieks in the distance, piercing.
Paralysed by fear, I recognize the voice, alarmed.
Dropping the food, I run towards the pleas, panicked.
Minutes seem like hours as I approach the dungeon.

Running with all the energy left in me, I finally arrive.
I start to panic as the screams cease, silent echos.
Opening the door as another slams, I rush to my sister's side.
Lying on the floor, twisted in agonizig pain.

Blood stains my hands as I place her head on my lap.
Trying to comfort her, desperately wanting the pain to vanish.
Looking into her eyes one last time, I tell her I love her.
Yet, only her soft moans answer as I craddle her to her death.

Looking into the candle, memories as vivid as ever.
Guilt washes over me, innocent beyond my belief.
Forced to live in silence, prisoner within myself.
Forced to cover the truth, bruises hidden from prying eyes.

© Fighter

*not my best, i know... this is only a draft.
**never happened to me.

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  • 19 years ago

    by ScarletHaze

    Even though its made up the way you write it makes you think it did. awesome draft. xox

  • Great draft althouh teh organization is off like she said play with the struture a lil . hiope things turn out right . looking foward to the final draftif ther is one .

    Good luck

  • Great draft althouh teh organization is off like she said play with the struture a lil . hiope things turn out right . looking foward to the final draftif ther is one .

    Good luck

  • 19 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Great concept, but somethings off, this draft is heading in the right direction though hun, maybe play around with the structure or something:)

    Wish you luck
    Love yeh
    Jenn x0x0x

  • 19 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    The flow could use a little bit of work...but like you said it was only a draft....good job n/e way it was very dark....great poem...4/5