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by Bryce Ellner Sep 30, 2005 category : Sadness, depression / lost relationships
I tried to change But I could not be I tried to see A different me I tried to cast A little spell I tried to play On life's sweet quell But all in vain I do see now Was my attempt I failed somehow I tried to change And now I see Three times what I took Now comes back to me And now I'm left here All alone Just this freezing flesh And this broken bone I don't know what I'll do now I don't know how I'll feel Somehow I have to continue A memory now sealed These tears are mine You shall not see Nor know the three times Taken away from me... But I'll always remember The rule of the three. Three times what thou givest Doth return to thee...
by David
What a great poem! i loved the ending the most. it almost seems as if it is a famous line. this is a great poem. gee. i gave it a 5. wish i could have given more. like a 100. lol david
by rachyBBY
That was a very good poem!! i liked it. sad tho =/