Good poem with a powerful subject. i especilly liked the second stanzer, but the whole peom flowed very well and was written perfectly. give some of mine a read please...i need all the comments and votes i can get, lol

I like how it's simple and rhymes. =)

You don't extend your vocabulary, yet it sound so well written and easy to understand. Job well done.

My favourite lines are:

"When our days have gone and our life has past
Each breath was precious from the first to the last
The earth cannot claim what belongs to the sea
Pure vapors will rise toward the sky to be free"

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(")-(") Arrivederci!

This poem is lovely & it did make me conscious of my precious breath...which of course i usually take for granted... but it keeps me going
great poem
deserves a 5/5
love
amy

I agree with Atomic! Very nicely don! I loved it!

Yep, very nicely done, deep and very well crafted, good job and thanks for commenting on my poem

Great poem! it makes me feel just graceful and happy inside which is definately what i needed today considering how rough it's been. thanks for the smile! wonderful job! the flow is great and it all just worked together greatly!

~Jacklyn