That was really good but u can always give the person the poem!! i like how u kept repeating the first line, it really gave u and understnading of what u were trying to say. 5/5

Wow amazong hun i like how in every other line ur saying sorry then that you never will take care xox

Nice;) Thanx for all the comments, I appriciate it:) Yes, my name is really Line... And, yes of course, you can add me to your favorites;)
Nicely written poem my friend, I loved it;)
By the way, good luck with the Jeremy guy;)
Love,
(yes my name:P) Line

I love that so much! especially:

I want to say I'm sorry
just so you'd know how I feel
I want to say I'm sorry
but guess what?...I never will.

i really wasnt expecting an ending like that, i love it!!!!!!!!

xX velvet kisses Xx

Thanx you a lot for all of your comments, and amazing poem, very well written. 5/5 well im gonna go read some of you other poems. keep up the good work!

Elissa