by Bill Turner Sep 30, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
At the spawn of creation we were torn apart |
by Ariana
This is really good , you have captured the emotions well and it rings true. Also although this has some repetition, it doesn't sound over-used or cliched. Nice work. |
Wonderful Bill!!! |
by Cait
Wow, one of teh best poems ive read in a while. |
by Bradley
Whoa..thats really long but bloody brilliant! keep writing!, check some of my poems out to if you want. Cheers |
by erely
I believe in this so much....Well Done!! |