Thats great
i lvoe it
a lot of emotoins
5/5

You use the word "they" in line 15 when i think you mean "the"

I like the last 3 lines. good show of emotion. keep it up

Wow awesome poem... the flow was good.. but maybe it should be in the depression section?? anyways great poem.
stay strong hunn.. much love.

Interesting, i liked it, i couldn't really catch on to the rhyme scheme and it wasn't a big deal so i didn't really go through it looking for one, but yeah this is a neat idea...simple yeah, but it's good, 5/5

Another great poem. I am also hearing the voices, only i am sure that they are mine....
Vanessa
xoxoxo