by Dave Sep 30, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
Priest in the vaults of death |
by Natalie
I think this was the best of yours I have read so far. The flow was great. The rhyming did seem a little too predictable and average. But I did like this one alot more then the others. Keep up the good work. =) 5/5 |
by Renee
You did an awesome job with this. It was very dark, yet very real. I love how you tie death and sleep together. My favorite line out of this peice is |
by .
This is also really good! 5/5 Loved it. It flows real good. |
I dont know exactly how to describe what this poem made me feel, it was like..idk...it was...creapy..n amazing all at the same time lol idk this was fabulious! i loved it 100%, if the numbers went higher then a 5 i would give u all the highest number i could! but since they dont, i'mma give u a 5/5 :) |
by Truest Lies
It seemed like a complex maze of darkness, the type that makes u shiver slightly! I liked it. |