2&3

by Dave   Sep 30, 2005


I must find my
place to be at ease
a silent place
among the trees
nights of peaceful ebony
carpet star filled Sky's
when morning breaks
the amber embraces my eyes
such beautiful sights
alone I am to see
longing for the day
there will be love for me
if I'm sleeping
please don't let me wake
I'll be dreaming
of days when love I'll make
I've set myself silent
for this one perfect day
since everything I've
had has faded away
but as long as the
sun will shine
the moon will rise
and love will leave me be

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  • 19 years ago

    by Dave

    Hehe yeah the titel is a bit to be worked on in honesty most of the things i write i dont name therm and just so happins the name for these comes from the page it was on in my notebook

  • 19 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Yep, nice flow.
    But I loved the discribtion in it! It was so well written, but the title dosnt reallt catch my eye.
    I really loved the poem your word usage wa very good.

    Well done ☼lisa☼

  • 19 years ago

    by Lonely Heart .ღ.

    Nice flow.. well done