Umm...this is an ok poem. It could use more flow and a few minor grammatical changes.

Really nice poem, i really liked it, beautiful description.

xxx cici xxx

Nice...i love fairies...and i wish to be them too...hey i love friends too...maybe i'll email you later...quite busy right now...or you can email me...mine is jane_fairies@hotmail.com...i'll check all your works later...you are so cute...