How about "Calm within the storm"? I like this poem, makes me think of God and the sad things that have happened to America in the past couple of weeks. Thanks for your kind words also. Best of luck.

I love the way this is written and the concept behind it all...excellent flow!

I'm sorry I can't think of a poem title for you... I too find it hard choosing a titles. maybe you could pick a line or a word from the poem.

Amazing poem, really! The title idea that I thought of was "Storm."
Or mayeb something like Storm and Peace, or4 something like that.

Good Writing!
beth

Nice title... hee hee. love the poem! the idea of doing TOW is a great idea it's really getting the creativity flowing so i want to thank you for that! we needed something other then the POW and the compititions to get people more active. thanks.

this poem is awesome and i found it extremely hard to critique it, which is strong credit to you! wonderful job my dear!

~Jacklyn

I really quite liked this there was something about it that just pulled me in