You need to keep your head up.. Your an amazing writer and you seem very strong... You poems are amazing and i love them..

I like the last two stanzas the most, they were great. They went together more than anything else in the rest of the poem. 5/5

Bryce

Not bad... i like it... i like the way you described it... keep writing!

~angel~

Very beautiful. Well done!
God Bless 5/5
You're very good at writing.

~Tay~

Whoa very pretty! so very emotional and a lot of ppl can probly relate. I love this great job!