Please Dont Go

by Dave   Sep 30, 2005


In my dreams my silent screams
They set me free and let me be
I sing myself lullaby's with lonely crys
Going Thur changes that only I see

Please let me go my way let me stay
I give my love while you turn away
Theres nothing to do but think of you
I spend my day alone this way

Tomorrows dreams I'm alone it seems
Changes I see there not from me
I see my souls not free
Where did you go your love I don't know

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  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    I just loved this. The emotions were one I could truly relate with and the flow was flawless.

    "Changes I see there not from me"
    ^I think you mean "they're" not "there"

    Well done *5/5*

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    It seems u really so inspire to wrote a poet.. all u've done are very expressive for me and i can feel its all comes to ur heart.. and i really love to read if all the words are come to thier hearts.. very nice and i was so enjoyed

  • 18 years ago

    by Misty

    I like this poem....very easy to relate too.

  • 18 years ago

    by *Unbreakable Soul*

    Oh very nice
    keep up5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    O.o Your poem rocks. Reminds me of my old boyfriend. I love your work.

    *~Meg~*

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