I like this poem alot. I'm sure that alot of people can relate to it on one level or another, and thats great! this was another great write!!!5/5

I think this poem would be absolutely perfect if you added some punctuation, like commas and such. It makes it easier to read and more emotional. But I do like the concept of this. Great job

Take Care,
Renee

Nice job with this poem. i thanks you for your comment i am sorry that my poem was not to your fulll likeing tho. nice job keep it up

This is a good poem...what can i say? great. 5/5

O.o Your poem rocks. Reminds me of my old boyfriend. I love your work.

*~Meg~*

Oh very nice
keep up5/5

I like this poem....very easy to relate too.

It seems u really so inspire to wrote a poet.. all u've done are very expressive for me and i can feel its all comes to ur heart.. and i really love to read if all the words are come to thier hearts.. very nice and i was so enjoyed

I just loved this. The emotions were one I could truly relate with and the flow was flawless.

"Changes I see there not from me"
^I think you mean "they're" not "there"

Well done *5/5*