Great poem. Keep working deep within your ideas and work on a very personal unique syle and view. Keep on working with your ideas and push them to the limits. I like your use of grammar because it makes it easier to read and makes the reader read the poem the way you meant it to be read, giving the reader the right emotions you constructed it to give. Keep working on your meter, its quite well done but can always be improved.

Also, I'm not sure whether in your first line its supposed to be "word" or "world".

Keep on writing and make use of your abilities!
Peace.