Amazing job. I never knew anyone can write a poem about a bird at all like this. I mean Wow!! i would have to say because this is amazing job like i said before. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

Hey you know how to write about birds that was very good 5/5

Amazing job nice floe love that the most keep it up 5.5

I like who you describe everything with so much details.

Might I add, it's a wonderful topic.

No complaints here.

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Great poem choppy in a few areas but other then that this is really good your a very talented person

Splendidly done. Two suggestions. Third stanza, second line, I might suggest "upon" instead of simply "on"
And the final two lines are the only ones that don't rhyme, which throws me off. Now for the good stuff. I love your imagery in this, truly brilliant along with your word choice. Well done.

Your poem was good except i am not to sure about your choice of descriptive language it seems most poems fail because of that ingredient even though your subject matter was good