by Nicole Oct 1, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Dying and Fragile, yet still so fragrant and beautiful. |
Loved it it was wonder ful |
by BrokenMisery
I like your imagery throughout the poem and the way you compared the rose to the girl was well explained and well written. You used grammar reasonably well, however evening up the lines to create a better flow could be useful, even though it doesn’t rhyme. Magnificent ideas and imagery. Great Work! |