Wow...that spoke staright to my heart...i love it...that is really deep..you got some kinda awesoem talent there man...ur a legend!!

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Awww wow this was amazing i like your flow you very good keep up the good work and thansk for the comment 5.5

Beautiful

~*Aww that was so sweet n so sad at the same time....who ever that gurl is shes really lucky 2 have a guy like you....well keep up the work, ur a great writer*~ XoXo

That so sweet and sad at the same time

Aww.. that was so sweet and deep.. i lykd ur rhyme and ur poem's words, they go deep in the heart.. it was reli sad and it brot tears to my eyes as i read it.. ur a gr8 writer. Keep up the good work!
take care
thnx 4 the comments

Great write , the only suggestion I would make is when you write them section off each stanza It'll make it easier for ppl to read your poems

Wow that was really good! i liked it a lot...I know the feelin' but from the girls point of view...

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