Definitely not one of your stronger poems.. i dont really like the poems message (kill yourself) but with the title in mind, i can take it easier as a poem portraying your suicidal conscience, rather than a poem telling everyone to kill themselves.. lol. anyway,.. as for the poem.. it was a little shaky throughout..

You shouldnt feel it, it might even be fun
The anticipation goes from a million to none
those rhymes seem a bit forced, and \"it might even be fun\" sounds really forced.. just doesnt fit for me..

Nobody likes you, but the rope looks good
this didnt really connect,.. i think a better way to express it would be something like \"nobody likes you, but the ropes always a handy friend\"
furthermore, i think the lines \"nobody likes you\" are a bit trite, and should be scrapped altogether..

Really no way you can try to prepare
Step off the curb and fall into a car unaware
that first line contradicts the whole message of the poem before this.. this line seems forced and the next line.. falling INTO a car doesnt really sound right, and using unaware in that way is a little awkward..

all in all,.. this piece depicted self-loathing and a lacking confidence, which seems a reason for the suicidal conscience.. it didnt have much for hidden meaning or a moral.. its just flat out, blow your fuc.king brains out.. i didnt enjoy this as much as your others, i think the flow stuttered a lot at times and a lot of rhymes/ideas seemed forced, but its not a bad poem..

Wow this is really good 5/5 deffinately I really like this poem! Great job!
Becky
xoxo