Chance

by Dave   Oct 1, 2005


Looking past form
farther in your eyes
i give you a message
carry it to your future
carry it from your past
give your life for what you believe
keep inside what you must
give the rest away
keep it in hand
keep it in mind
never let it go
piece of mind would make you smile
a love in the night would make you cry
you give your love
you give your soul
what good does it do
find the reason to strive on
where did it go
find the reason in what you will
because it will never last
where is the future leading us
where is the past pushing us
hearts on fire
are now burnt to Ash's
your love for me is gone
yet mine for you remains
i want my chance
my chance to say i love you
my chance to say i do

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  • 17 years ago

    by Blissful

    Wow .. this was just beautiful. The passion described here just blew me away.

    "hearts on fire
    are now burnt to Ash's"
    ^amazing lines expressed here.

    Well done *5/5*

  • 19 years ago

    by Tammy

    I loved this one Dave! Very powerful. Awesome write!
    Take care

  • 19 years ago

    by Renee

    I love this one. All the words string together perfectly. I don't know how to explain this one to myself, it's confusing yet it makes perfect sense. You definitley kept me reading through the whole poem, and I love it when a poem is like that.

    Take Care,
    Renee

  • 19 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    That was very beautiful.
    Although I couldn't work out the story behind it, it sounded touching all the same.
    Keep up the nice poetry!
    beth

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