Brittany,

You question has been answered in the poem, it does make sense. We all feel confused about so many things in our lives from time to time. But do not ever forget all your goals, what you aspire for, dreams and desires - all these make our lives worthwhile and complete. Good write.

Warmest regards,

Steve

This was a greatly written piece brittany .. and u adress an issue that alot of us think about but tend not to pay much mind to... know that confusion is jus another one of those things in life like death .. that we dont know why its there .. and somtimes we get lost in thoughts of it ... but everything even confusion and death serve a purpose in the grans scheme of things ... great poem .. uniquely written piece... keep it up .. =)

That says it all. good work. :)

Brittany, I think this is an issue we have all faced more than once in our lives. This was a great subject to write about, well done! Take Care! Brooke~

I liked this one its really good even tho u may not think its a poem and it may not be its still comin from the heart and thats what counts and its awsome
keep it up
5/5

This poem made a lot of sense to me, I hope you keep asking questions. As it helps you to write stronger material.
Take care
Paul

Hi Brittany.. It been a long time since I have a chance to read your work. I notice a few spelling and grammatical errors. This coming from a dyslexic (hehe) Like at the end you got why out instead of way out for one. There few words which was written with passion, you need to take look again as if you were the editor of a major paper and see what you can do correct few mistakes. Don't lose the passion and go with the flow though. Best work I done was when I was pist (or drunk) Keep it up good work.

Hello where are you hun?

Lol well it was my 1st time to write a poem like that.