Ok, don't think i'm just saying this ok. but that poem was so good. it was also very sad. i like it, i would like to see more of your poems. xoxoxoxo

Wonderful poem, very abigious I couldnt help but find that whilst reading it there was a hidden meaning or truth...I loved the concept.

Thank you so much for your kind words, and no I am not a proffesional poet its just a great hobby for me.

Kind regards
Hayley

Great poem, really enjoyable to read. 5/5. take care.

Yeah I'll agree with all of those comments except for the xxxx
anywho you spell throat like that
sorry its an unhealthy obsession
It was very good but your friends will always be there for you
See ya if I go
Em

This was a great poem , had a lot of depth , emotion and feeling, i hope that u continue with ur poems , keep up the great job u got a 5/5 form me

-*Heart Broken for Eternity*

I love it, I was totally taken in from the first line. Just one teeny weeny thing that you might want to change? Throught...is it supposed to be throat?
Amazing poem anyway though. 5/5.
*VioletRaven*

Its 'throughout' through-out. It's a made up word I guess, but hey as artists we are allowed to do that.

Sorry, just ignore me.

OMFG!!! I did spell it wrong after all, I was thinking of the wrong word.

Wow I like this poem
its really good
EM

Wow that was amazing i love this poem!

WOW i liked it it was a good poem man...keep it up and yea

Wow, that was unbelievably good! im sooo impressed!, i wish i was talented like you!, damn that was good!

The thing thati enjoyed most was the wording. your wording is strong. it mustve been hard with the rhyming. i can never rhyme to well espcially on purpose.

I must say this is a very good poem
The flow is excellent and the rhymes are not forced at all
Great job, 5/5
~Br0k3n

"Death escapes me I do not wane,
No-one else will feel my pain"