I think this one is ok, but i wonder if it refers to anyone in particular???

This poem cuts my soul and rips my heart. it shatters my thoughts and twists my realities. all in all, it affects me ....

Wonderful poem that is honest and heartfelt. Flow and diction flawless.

I really like your style im off now to read more of your work.

Kind regards
Hayley

Its a lot better then your other one. . .
Life/Death
I shalln't vote cause I'm lazy and you don't vote on mine
Em

Not bad didnt mind it would like to read more of your poems

Not gonna say much..but i really liked it.. Great poem