by Truest Lies Oct 1, 2005
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
Can the wind blow in the other direction, |
by Marjan
Wow, that was amazing elizabeth. |
That was a pretty good poem for a girl ur age...keep it up! |
I liked this a lot..I think it would have flowed a lot better had you kept the rhyming scheme you began with, the rythym was just a tad off to me...but other than that it was really good, good message ect. Good job, keep up the great work XoX |
by crystal
Amazing poem. i love it. there is so much truth behind it. keep up the great work! |
VERY GOOD POEM AND VERY TRUTHFUL 5/5 |