OMG! THIS WAS SO GREAT! WOW!!! There is nothing wrong with this at all!!! You deserve more than a 5/5! wow!
~ME~

Beautiful. it engages the reader (in this case me) and pulls them in. wonderful, and very sad

Ruby

Hay.. thats a really good poem.. i like the way it rhymes it has a really good flow. keep up the great work.. bec xox

This was good i loved everything bout it keep it up!!!

Such a sad poem :(

its very well written. keep them up :-)

I read your latest poems before this one and I have to tell you that you've been consistantly improving. Though I must say, all of them still have the same heartfelt message and individualism. I think you're a great writer with a lot of potential...keep writing and take care.

~rolo

P.S.-I'm always around if you need to talk. Rolo1304@msn.com---I don't imagine you will be willing to spill your guts to me...but if you ever need to do it and no one else is around, feel free to.

WOW!!!! GREAT JOB !!!!!!! that was amazing!!!! it was like perfect!!!!
i really want to cry right now!!!!
~*Roxy*~

plzz look at mine if u get a chance! thanks

Nice poem. Your wording was really strong. Keepp up the good work. Iam also sorry bout what happened, n i hope your alrite.

Honestly,its cool
but the tittle looks does not siutable
ang everything ,,said to be OK

Cutting poems are very popular on this site, but they are my least favourite types of poems. This is because they all say the same thing, maybe a few words are switched around, but they all have knife, life, sad and end in them, just as this one does. I don't mean to offend but this poem is very samey and run of the mill. I'm not overly keen on this poem, so I will say no more.

Amazing