This is really good. 5/5 Stay strong.
Thanks for the comment.
Becky
xoxo

We all have our problems, but we have to stay strong, and if your not strong, then be very tough, thats what counts in the worst of times.
just hang on, and things will get better, I promise

Amazing poem! very well written.
and you can beat this. just stay strong!
crystal

Thanks for the support it really means alot to me but i'll be ok i was thinking about drinking tonight and i have been sober for a month but i decided not to give in so i wrote this poem, thanks again, you'll are so nice to give support to someone you dont know i'm very greatful to have you'll reading my poems

~*WOW that was really good loved it 5++ i can kinda relate to this i use 2 have a problem with drink n drugs but i'm ova it now....u juss gotta stay strong and hang in for a lil while things will get easier....well good luck*~ XoXo

I heart the way you would describe the state of being drunk..I'm positive there's more to it, but I can't put it into words. Very, very nicely done, M'dear.

My favourite lines are:

"This battle I've fought time and time again,
Only this tme I feel I've lost my will to win."

Oh and about the poetic formation, it would be highly appreciated. =)

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(='.'=)
(")-(") Arrivederci!

Hey it wont let me post anything on the other poem i was going to r/c on but it was good (last poem) i voted though 5/5
on this poem 5/5 i really liked it

Wow this is sad... I've read a few poems don't leave the site, yeah sometimes its rough but there are always a few nice people that make it worth while and the fact that you can share your poetry with the world should make you smile a bit..... but maybe not. Thanx a whole lot for your comments.

Wow this is sad... I've read a few poems don't leave the site, yeah sometimes its rough but there are always a few nice people that make it worth while and the fact that you can share your poetry with the world should make you smile a bit..... but maybe not. Thanx a whole lot for your comments.

That was so deep.. i lykd it.. i loved ur last line..
thnx 4 the comment
take care

This was a really good poem. i just loved it so much. keep up the great work.
Emma 5/5

Aw, That's sad!! Great poem though! Just kinda sad.. But keep it up 5/5

`natalie xx

This one is another wonderful write...

very emotional... very powerful...
beautifully written..

excellent job...