Beautiful

OOOO So scary good. :)

Awesome, it was very well done, you have the talent to go so far, keep it up, my friend
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Oh, *faint* what a glorious dance that would be, what tearing, sweet, agony!!
eehhh, I truly loved this.
There was something about the element of dance death, and waves mixed together that, well, really made this poem great!

//T.L.//

I played this piece out like a movie in my mind. It is a great poem and the repiticion is awesome (how ever you spell "repitiion" haha.)

>black&&blue

This made me feel dizzy... but in the best way possible. A great poem. 5/5

Ravyn

Oh my! This was great. The title really caught my attention cause I love dancing. And the poem.. well.. It was just wow. Excellent use of vocab, everything flowed well together. It was just great. No need to change anything at all. Keep it up! 5/5

Natalie``

Moolit should be moonlit.

"two and fro" should be "to and fro".

"so she advices"... advices is the wrong word here. advises? advances?

Great poem, there's some awesome imagery here.

Wonderful use of imagery. Dancing has a long history of darkness and it is expressed well here. Love the choice of vocab as well it is lucious. A few typos but still a wonderful job.

I have not enough words to describe how great your poems are, well deserved 5/5