The way you expressed your feelings and the words you chose are very unique and thoughtful. It's refreshing to see creativity in poetry. Very impressive poem C: I hope to see your creativity more often.

Great poem you seem to have a knack to writeing in this style of verse i really like it and wish i could write the same way or even wish i had the kanck of a love poem all just to confuseing to me

You are a tough critic the poem flowed with a soft hamonic melody... great job

Awwl that was really cute, and very nice i think it was anything but sloppy!! jus maybe work on the rythm in one spot but thats only if you think u need it lol. anyways i thought it was put together very nicely.. great job 5/5.

I think it's incredible. It's very creative and all that, I'm completely running out of words to say. And every time I feel like I'm doing a terrible job at complimenting your writing.
I may not be on for a few days hun, my internet was disconnected and I don't know when I'll get it back, either tomorrow, Wednesday, or some other time within a month...Don't bother calling, because I'm continusly going out, so I don't know what times I'm home.
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Love always,
Mortie.x.

Thats probably 1 of the best poems iv seen on this site just bcause of the idea behind it. i love the whole song theme bcause songs do trigger memories like that. 5/5 well done keep em coming x

I like it. mosy poetry is just slopped together. i like it.

I like the pattern to your words. it's very well done.

That was soo romanticly heart warming, i loved it grt job
take care til next time
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I enjoyed it whether you believe that it was sloppily put together or not. If you do re-enter it I would be happy to read it too. But I think this is written well!

Brooke

Aw, i really like this. I think it reads well and not in the slightest bit sloppily !!!

xxx cici xxx

Aww. thats a really cute poem.. i loved it. 5/5 bec x.x

This poem is amazing!! I like the way you potray love as a song. because a lot of songs make you think of love. Great Job!!

It's a cool poem. Specially knowing that every one has that special song about some one.

This is so unique and filled with greatly portrayed emotions. Every stanza simply sings for me, with it's beautiful descriptions and very original tone.
My favorite part is:

-You remind me of a pause in my favorite song
where the music is gone, and the voices are swept
all that's left is a soft breath
before the next line begins.-

Amazingly written!