Short but well constructed. Your form of writing is unique but it works for you. I like your style of rhyming too. It's like it snuck up on me. Weird, I know v.v; but it's true. Impressive poem! Your uniqueness is a talent covetted by poets. Don't let it go to waste C: I sure hope to see more from you.

Nice it is ver personal! and can be realted to lots of ppl at the same time I like that